Memo Assignment

I will use the peer review as basically a way to critique myself. The message that i am attempting to convey is one that shows that i learned from this seemingly insignificant event. I feel that the peer review is something that will be somewhat constructive, but many people may not see how this could affect someone as much as it has affected me. With this criticism it will be easy for me not only to finish this memoir with strong visuals, but also it will help me to convey just how much i have gain from this event in my childhood. The whole point of this memoir was to show that I learned to think before i just jump into something and take action, and with the critique I can see how to improve on my idea.
In the past when i have had critiques of my work and by applying one persons viewpoint of my work and then incorporating my own ideas, I have been able to make papers that flow extremely well and convey my point even better. In this specific instance this is much more difficult because what I am writing about is a personal event that has personal meaning to me. Having said this, it is much more difficult for me change my personal events and how i portray them based on another persons opinion of my paper. I will attempt to portray my point the best way i can and i know that this will only help my paper and even if the person completely misses the point of my story completely it will still help me in writing my paper because i will then know i need to make my memoir much more descriptive. I am excited for this peer review and know that this will help my grade and memoir immensely.