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For my argument paper I will be studying whether or not Diet Soda is good for you or not

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There are four main criteria that I will be judging this restaurant on. The first will be the atmosphere inside Einstein Brothers Bagels. This will be a very easy subject to review and even if people say that it may be a bit crowded inside, this restaurant does what it can with the space it has been given. They even stem off a portion of the customers to the smoothie restaurant next to einsteins in order to cut the time of the line. The second criteria will be the quality of the food. The general consensus for fats food restaurants is that the quality is very sub par, but Einsteins really uses fresh products and they do not hesitate to throw away any product that doesnt seem fresh. The third criteria will be the actual taste of the food and whether people like it or not. People love the bagels and food at einsteins and there really isnt much to defend on this issue. The final criteria is the staff at einsteins. As a whole they have an incredibly friendly staff, but there are one or two bad apples. The employees clearly enjoy their job and love making the customers happy.

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The audience for this paper would be anyone considering going to einsteins bagels located in the business administration building. This review will provide the audience with enough information so that they can decide whether they would like to eat at this restaurant or not. As a restaurant you dont really get to much of the values aspect. However, I do know they are a predominately jewish establishment and while all of the bagels are kosher the over is not so therefore the bagels cannot be considered kosher after they are cooked. They are very keen on making money any way they can and they will try and persuade you into making your meal into a bundle so they can make more money and this angers alot of people. Their friends or customers in this situation are interestly in three things. They want good tasting food, fast service, and low prices. Einsteins is fully aware of the good tasting food and the fast service, but it seems to be the price issue that they dont understand. It seems as if every month the price goes up about 10 cents in some sneaky attempt to jack up the price without the customers noticing. They are doing a great job in the first two categories but it is the price that is killing them at the moment. The employees see the real tangible benefits as making money and seeing the satisfied looks on the customers faces when the get their food. This cannot be said for all of the employees as their are exceptions, but for the most part these are the two main benifits of einsteins employees. When it comes the corporate and the big guys upstairs, it seems as if all they care about is how to make the most money. They relentlessly come out with new sanwiches with less and less ingredients for higher and higher prices and this really needs to stop. The customer base of einsteins has already been dropping and corporate is not helping this situation. As a whole einsteins as well as its employees are doing very well and will be in business for a long time.